Night Falls
Night FallsNight falls heavy on this heart of mineshadowed dreams and fears entwineTheres no respite with the passing of timenow sadness reigns in this troubled mindNight falls heavy on this heart of...
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words filled with such pain and sadness, sioux ... sometimes night can fall on even the brightest of days ... you've captured the feelings well in this ...Why do we close our eyes when we dream,...
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The weight presses down palpably...and such weight in these words...dark and filled with sadness...well expressed...Every new beginning comes fromsome other beginnings end...Why not try a new...
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Hi, Sioux ~ Darkness and sadness perfectly conveyed.....nicely written.Cheers!HarryPlease come visit me at www.gillelands.com/poetry/ and check out my new book at www.lulu.com/harry/
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The use of rhyme adds to the feeling of pressure, and sadness. Beautifully done."A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness...It finds the thought and...
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Seems to have the "feel" and flow of a song Sioux, in something of a style I haven't heard in a while. Wonderful in that, albeit sad, also has soemthing alike a powerful echo. Very well done.Po The...
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Ohh Princess..this is lovely and aches ~hugss~i have missed your words~secret~
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Sadness oozes from this pleasurable read, although I also felt a hint acceptance, good write my friend, BG
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Sometimes the sadness just has to have a place to go... Thank you Beth.sioux
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Thanks Po...guess it does sound a bit like a "cryin in my beer song." I was just going with the feelings...sioux
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BGNot so much acceptance, as futility I think. It was just a "dark day." Thank you sweet friend.sioux
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Reading this once again, Sioux, wishing the bright sunshine of a wonderful day to chase your dark night away.......Awesome read,WRITE ON!!Poetic Columnist for Crop & Prop...
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Sioux, this is a beautiful piece, where the structure and the sense of it all come together to make a very satisfying, and moving, whole. Lovely.Davie
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Secret, Your always kind and sweet replies soothe an aching soul. Thank you dear friend.
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